IRON MAN

[maikuu]

[Brian LEE]

Summary about Iron Man

Tony Stark has been genius since childhood. At age 21, he of new CEO of Stark Idnustries has made a lot of weapons, robots and stellites. Weapon's presentaion day, he is attacked from terrorists and he is hurted his heart. And he is locked in the cave. But his heart is changed a mechanical heart .Yinsen helped him. In the cave, he made first steel armor suit and he is succeeded in escaping.

When he stayed in the desert Obadiah stane was dealing weapons with terrorists. Tony was known the truth. Angry Tony suggest making thing to Rhodey. Rhodey is Tony's best friend and he is soldier. But he refused it. So Tony made a second high-tech armor suit end of many failures. Its name is a "Iron Man". The terrorists and their territory is destroyed form Iorn Man.

Meanwhile Obadiah stane also made powerful steel armor suit when Tony dropped the first suit's wreckages in the desert. His suit is more powerful than first suit. Later, Obadiah stane was poltting to fight with Tony. But Tony received help from his secretary and he could kill Obadiah stane. His secretary is Pepper. They have been something between them for a long time. To like...or To love. Now, Tony is inventing more and more new armor suit. Because he is super hero and he is "Iron Man"

Teacher's note: Very good beginning-to-end summary. Recommendation: Change everything to 'present tense.' Thanks --mike www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[Brandon87]

His father was the world's press and the famous weapons manufacturer Tony Stark is a rich as Bill Gates, our reality Tony Stark have a bestfriend his is name "rhodey" he job is Air force soldier tony went to Afghanistan with rhodey his announcement completed successfully developed a new weapon he planed successfully While soldiers and comic break time Afghanistan's from he is being attacked by abducted He got it in the heart of the strange Barely survived in there When Tony is a busy mind control them,

They tried to Tony Agreement For agreement they are want to tony make in Forced to create a powerful for weapons but He was not create a weapon for their he had try to Escape for outside Started made suit finally he is escape with a secret weapon to create a successful His first suteuin "Mark 1" is weared a successful escape in there Tony returned to the United States

Since then he is rezilze Self-made to know the damag a lot of people weapons finally Quit arms business afterword He produced is the ultimate high-tech super-suit at home he made in a cave as a basis to start building pass Hard time, he will make a superhero named "Iron Man" before He has one secretary . tony have a trustworthy also love to mind of her Tony was holding place come back to Afghans he is punish them and The villagers are Structure the people someone Tony's suit who wants to bring about He's dad's business partner "obadiah stane "

he always jealousy Tony's father to Tony they are want a Skilled genius brain of him Tony's the one thing ask of her and She was accepted obadiah stane was deal tried him to kill thems but They had failed obadiah stane try killed of them Tony knew that his goes trying to punish but Unfortunately he is Secretary got dangerous finally He is a big fight take up obadiah stane "Iron Man vs. Iron Monger"

Win a victory in the fight factors l could say that Tony has the spirit of experimentation of responsibilities The fight is also the winner of the Ironman

Teacher's note: Before posting, always read for punctuation and spelling. This is a very fluent summary with tons of vocal. The syntax needs big improvement, English grammar. Thanks for posting. --mike www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com


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[Tung092]

I got thrid

Tony stark is the biggest weapons company's CEO. He is a talent man, he finish M.I.T with the highest points when he was 17. When he to manage his father's company, he use his wisdom to make more powerful weapons, it make his company and himself are more famous. But his bad things are to drink to excess and he is a dandy.

One day, he go to show off his company's new weapons in the battlefield, but after that, he fall down in some terrorists trap and this time he got hurt from his company's weapon and coming to die. A person name's "Yinsen" help him alive with a machine. After that, he help Stark to make iron armor and spend his life too help stark out.

He saw terrorists use his weapons to kill people and he feel it when he fall down their trap, so when he go back,he change too much, he doesn't drunk and he doesn't be a dandy any more. Then he shut down his company's weapon part and try more the other science.

At that moment he start to make the iron armor Mk II. He want to use his wisdom and his power to kill his wrong, like something using his weapons terrorists. But his company deputy Obadiah Stane don't agree that and going to hate him. Stark's helper pepper can't believe why Obadiah don't agree that, she go to check his computer and get his evidence of a crime.so she find the government to help.

Obadish know his crime to be exposed, so he go to find the terrorists and get the iron armor Mk I. Stark still doesn't know Obadish is a bad guy, so when Obadish come to kill me and take off his power heart, he is very surprise. But his best friend Rhodey coming on time, so Stark didn't die and he know Pepper will have danger from Obadish, so he go to save her and kill Obadish.

After this happening, people call this armor "IRON MAN" and Stark recognize that's what he is.

Teacher's note: Good thorough summary. Please be careful with spelling, punctuation and, grammar. I like how you use present tense throughout this essay. Very good. --mike www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[joe123]

Iron man is talking about Tony Stark's life-changing, who is be a iron man before and after. Tony is a famous weapons developer and he got everything he wants (money and women), but he stills feel lonely. He works with his uncle-Obadiah Stane. And he only trust two persons; his secretary- Pepper and his friend-Rhondey.

One time, tony got a job, show his new weapon to militaries, after the show, something was happen, Tony is in activity. The captors need Tony builds his new weapon for them. In cativity, Tony has his second heart and meets a new friend-Yinsen; he is the important guy in Tony's life, who is change Tony's life and teach him to use his power to help the people who need help. Then, Tony starts to create the frist iron man and use this iron to escape.

When he was escaped and go back U.S.A., he answer the reporter and he said that" I saw young Americans killed, by the very weapons I created." and he wants to stop his weapony, but Obadiah hold it back. After that, he starting to create a new iron man and new power second heart, he tying a lot of test for this new iron man. At this moment, nobody know what does he do. Then,he goes to the party when he is finish his new iron man soon, In the party, a reporter shows him few photos about the bad guies use his weapons to kill a lot of innocent persons. He feels very restless with anxiety, after that, he go back home and use his new iron man to help these people and
destory the weapon from the bad guies.

Tony starts feel Obadiah got some doubt, so he tell Pepper and needs her hands to seach the evidence of a crime of Obadiah. The real situation was that Obadiah was the person to manipulate from behind the scenes; includ Tony's cativity and his father's dead. When Obadiah knows what do they do, he starts his plan, he takes the second heart from Tony and uses his new machine to kill them all. This moment, Tony use his frist second heart and iron man to strike back with Obadiah.

At the end, Obadiah was lose and everyone know that Tony is iron man.

Teacher's note: Thank you for a deeply rendered summary. This essay shows that you really understand Iron Man 1. There are a number of spelling and grammar errors which we're going to work on, but I like the use of present tense. Good post. --mike www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[kook]

The movie is Tony heroes he is smart he sells goverment weapons work business Tony is ever Open to the public new weapons. the new weapons is amazing Does he go back home but on the way caught in terrorist terrorist is say for us make new weapons

tony is locked in a cave and make weapon but he doesn't making weapon he making iron armor and iron armor hang weapon tony in one's iron armor cave get out and destory Illegal distribution his weapon

tony go back home and presentation he say 'anymore i doesn's make weapon' tony partner stane persuade persistently tony but tony is refuse a favor and tony make in laboratory new iron armor angry stane tony in cave made iron armor find and make iron armor and fight tony but tony win and stane die

oh very very very very very very very very very very very tired,

How register post image??????? Oh my god!!!!!

Teacher's note: I would ask the other students how they post photos. I think it's pretty easy.

In this essay, it's difficult to understand where sentences end. In fact, it seems like one long sentence. We need to break it into understandable complete thoughts with periods (full stops). This summary is a good start, but the grammar will need some work. Thanks for posting. --mike www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[Jane714]

The summary of Iron Man.

The hero of Iron Man is called Tony,He was born is New York city , a rich family, From a rich family, He didn't like all of the spoiled brat. Only know enjoyment, He is really intelligent, He graduated from the Massachusetts institute of technology power engineering when he was 17 years old , and proud of the achievements, He found his social position- the family enterprise " stark company" He is a new boss.but his parents died,He works harder than before,but he always made trouble,Fortunately ,he has a smart and sexy fmale assistant called Virginia to give him more care and more help.

But soon after the kidnapping , Thoroughly changed the Tony's life. When Tony lead military observers to hand in , and developed product test results,but in a extremely atrocious the terrorist attack,Fanally, In the chaos , the shrapnel hit his heart,When Tony woke up, He found a strange device, It is this instrument maintained his life. The terrorist required Tony to create more great powerfull weapons.

And so, he improved steel armor, and made another piece of fusion energy, Become a real iron man.

Tony just use the old heart ,And beat Stan, In the second day of the news conference, Tony declared :" I am Iron Man !!!"

Teacher's note: Good summary. I suggest more balance. Most of the summary is about the beginning of the film. Not much about the middle and end. Thanks for posting. --mike www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[ki_eun_choi]

Tony Stark has a genius, talent and he's billionaire. He is a brilliant international weapons developer but he has a life-changing experience when he
becomes a prisoner in afghanistan.

One day he becomes prisoner when he went afghanistan to announced new weapons. He suffered a life-threatening chest injury but barely survived. The guerrilla force wants us to develop a powerful weapon for them to threaten him. But he created "Mark1" instead of weapons and then successed in escaping. He was a life-changing first-hand experience.

He said, "I saw young americans killed, by the very weapons I created." and he declares that he stop producing weapons. He's ultimate high-tech suit based on "Mark1" to develop their own genius and a ton of effort to start swelling. The guerrilla force also develops titan like a "Mark1".

He is a lot of trial and error and continues to fail. Finally, he integrated the ultimate cutting-edge science and technology "Iron Man" is complted.
He's the ultimate superhero "Iron Man" and being reborn.

His company has a traitor. His name is Obadiah Stane. He was once the partner of Tony's deceased father, helps run Stark Enterprises. But Obadiah deprives the heart(electromagnet) of Tony then he makes an another Iron Man.

Iron Man fought an another Iron Man and Iron Man won. Justice won. When he interviewed, "What's the true?" answered a reporter's question. The truth is......."I am "Iron Man"."

It's very interesting flim.
Thanks for the great time.

Teacher's note: Well done. You did a good job of hitting the main beats without too much detail. We'll need to work on the grammar. I would start with using present tense. Thanks for posting --mike www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[Tony.Si.Yue]

Tony Stark is a brilliant weapons developer and ladies' man. He devotes himself to weapons research and a dissolute life. He is a high-key man, seeking high achivement. But I think he also is lonely. Fortunately, Tony has the greatest assitant, Pepper and has a honest friend, Rhodey.

The story begins. During a military maneuver, the shrapenel of projectile hits Tony, and the terrorist imprison him. Because of that, he knows the terrorist has his weapons. With the help of another scientist, Tony survives, and the first generation "IRON MAN" comes into being. Then, Tony escapes.

Back in the US, Tony makes a desion that shocks everyone. He decides to shut down the Stark company. Then, he focus on "IRON MAN" development. But, the fact is, Obadiah Stane, who was once the partner of Tony's deceased father, comes into power of the company. Soon the second generation "IRON MAN" comes into the world, and Tony's assitant Pepper, found that the person who wants to kill Tony is Stane.
Then, a war starts, finally ,the real "IRON MAN" beats the false one. Tony saves everyone's life.

But the another question appears. Tony acknowledges that he is "IRON MAN" in a news conference. I said, he is a high-key man.

Teacher note: An excellent high-key summary. I like how you use present tense. This is the preferred, always-true time. We're going to clean up a few grammar issues. Thanks for posting. --mike www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[OlegFromRussia]

Iron Man is about Tony Stark, who is the most successful and richest developer of weapons, and how his life changed. He handed weapon and felt himself fine, have fun spending time with beautiful ladies and nothing was thinking, before he was attacked and put in captivity in Afghanistan.

There he saw how many people die from his weapons, including the Americans, and it awakened in him the conscience. After he built his first iron man, and escaped from captivity, he told the conference that no more engage in arms.

But it was not easy for him because his vice Obadiah Stane was in alliance with terrorists, and decided to kill him. Later, he created a more perfect iron man, and through his best friends Pepper and Rhodey was able to defeat the insidious Obadiah. I like Tony, he's really cool, it has all what you can want, money, success, fame, ladies.

I really liked this film, special effects and story are great. Everyone who has not seen, I recommend you watch it.
Thank you!

Teacher note: A very concise summary that captures the main points. Past tense is OK, but present tense is recommended for this type of essay. It feels more timeless. Some choice vocabulary here too. Good post. --mike www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com