NIM'S ISLAND

[tjmatt]

Hi. Nim's Island is a very nice movie, but it is very bad for me because it is for children. I do not have idea what's name movie maybe is Nim in Ratona. The story is about one girl, her father, and writer she is named Alexandra Rover. The girl is named Nim. She lives on the island with her father only is name Jack Michael Russel.

The Island address degrees south 20 and 162 west. The whale is named Emily and the porpoise is named Silky. Her father goes to travel and her father promises to come back on Thursday but has not returned. After buccaneers come to the island, she is was very scared.

[hiroki]

The movie is a family movie. It's interesting. This will be good for me to study English because the movie is for children to watch. It is easy to understand. The movie appearance Nim Rusoe is very active and brave. Follow the example of one's child.
Face up to the cold hard facts of the situation for Alexandra Rover. I learned a lot.

[Larissa]

Thousands of miles away there is a childlike little girl. Her name

[maikuu]

Thanks --mike www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[muruj]

Nim's Island is a story about girl and her father [who] are living in Island .she name's Nim .she is mother orphan. Nim has friend from island are animals,iguana ,sea lion and gull. Nim is love [loves] to read a lot private stories .Alex Rover is story -the world's greatest adventure . she loves this story very much . story writer is name Alexandra Rover .Alexandra has the disease phobia from the outside world period 16 week. Nim's father wants to go ocean but Nim she wants stay on the island storm could not have taken place the father back . Nim is worry ,because she saw people are coming to island .Nim is send massage to Alex Rover to help but his email the writer and Alex Rover of imagination .writer who know is Nim alone on the island .Was able to get out of the house to help Nim .Alexandra while access to the island Nim's father was able to repair the poat with help gull friend Nim. Nim did not believe that the Alex Rover of imagination and writer story Alexandra from send massage .The father arrived in time to the island . End of the story Nim's father is married [marries] Alexandra.

Teacher's Note: This is a very complete summary. Well done. I notice some P. 83 business here. The spelling is good. Overall, I really like this essay. Thanks. --mike www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[tayfun1905]

Nim's Island is a story about family adventure film. Nim's mother was die [died] at the sea when she was tiny. She lives in a Island with her father. Someday his [her] father left at the Island about several days for his job. He is a scientist. Nim made a party with animals. Next day a big storm came up the Island. Her father caught in a storm on the sea. She was thinking and missing her father. By the way one tripship came the Island but she wants to kick out theirs on the Island because she wants to live only with her father in the Island. She took help from animals. By the way she has favorite book hero his name is Alex Rover but Alex Rover written by Alexandra Rover. So she is a woman but Nim knows he is a man. Alexandra Rover sent a mail to Nim's father because she wants to learn about volcano. Nim saw the mail because his father did not come yet. They sent a mail a few times and Nim wanted help from Alexandra Rover. She invites her at the Island and she accepted her invite. By the way her father strives for return. Alexandra Rover came in the Island but Nim was not waiting to a woman she did not believe she is a Alex Rover. Finally she accepted she is a Alexandra Rover. Alex Rover is a only book character. Then her father came back and they live each other.


Teacher's Note: This is a very clear and concise essay with pretty OK grammar. One issue to address is the shift from present tense to past tense for no need. I recommend telling the story from the present tense (general time) since the story is always in existence. Thanks for posting. --mike http://www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[raad1]

the movie [Nim's Island] talked about girl which she lived in the Island that called Nim's Island. Her father was a scientist, and he left the Island into the sea for many days, but he sinking [sank]. She diceded with her friends which they are animlas to help her father after she mad a party. However, she saw peoples which they want's to occupied the Island. Then, she saw a message from Alex Over which she is a women, but the girl thought she is a man. the message was about the Volcano. The girl wants from her to help her to kicked the people who wants to occupied the Island, and she accpet the invite. However, she went to the Island. on that time, her father back to the island. the girl was shocked after she saw it. However, they could beat the people and the island stay for them, and her father decided to married from the Alexndra Rover, and the lived on peace.

Teacher's Note: Several authors mention that Alexandra and Jack marry in the end. I didn't get this from the movie. This is a pretty OK essay with a full summary. I recommend using present tense for general time (rather than past tense as some of this essay uses). Big thanks for posting. --mike http://www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[mr.fefo]

Hi My teacher , i'm Feras
Nim's Island is a story about young girl and her father lives at island , her name is Nim , Her mother was great oceanographer , she died when nim was baby , Her father's name is Jack Rusoe , he is scientist and he is interesting in new discovery . He told his daughter secret about the island dosen't tell anyone about it . She loves animals , and reads the stories , likes life on island because she doesn't have to go to school just plays with her animal , always plays with Selkie , galileo and fred . When she wants to know news about world , she is reading a book and imaging it . One day her father bought story was talked about Alex Rover the hero who Protects people from bad guys , she likes him and wish to see him one time because he is her hero , her father wants to find out blue whale and she doesn't want to leave the island and he is Promise his daughter will back after two days and he will talks to her at night by radio . after her father gone , she got email from Alex Rover , she surprised because her hero writing to her father . The days passed , her father didn't talk to her and she worried but him , she doesn't know her father having problem on ocean . When she walking on sand she saw ship is coming and she is afraid of them because she and her father got Promise to care about island , she is Asking to Alex rover to help her and trying to speak to her father and she cannot . The Ship has tourists , they want to visit new island nothing also . Nim doesn't know Alex Rover is women , Alexandra Rover is afraid from outside when nim [Nim asks] asking for help , she was nervous and confused however she did it , got the plane and boat and she arrived to nim's island and mate her . Nim was surprised and didn't believe Alex Rover was woman but in The end her father finally came back to island , Nim was happy because her father came and mate writer Alex Rover . In the end jack and Alexandra Rover got married . It was nice movie thanks teacher

Teacher's Note: And thank you! This is a very nice essay with lots of detail at a consistent level. This shows a high level of writing skill. As your English syntax improves, your wrting will be very cool. I recommend to focus on a consistent time frame. Your future as a writer looks bright.
--mike http://www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[fawazshammari]

Nim's Island is a story about Family consists of father and daughter. Living on the island In Singapore. she name's [Her name is] Nim. Her father is Scientist. She had friends of the animals on the island. Lion and sea gull bird and orchid. Her father went on a business trip by boat Middle of the ocean. Said to she i [He says to her] will come back on Thursday. Warned her of not having parties in his absence. But setting up a concert with her friends the animals . Storm occurred to her father middle of the ocean. Then cut off contact with her.She was very scared him. She knew a man name is Alexandra Rover sent massage to Alex Rover to help, but she sent messages mistake to Writer name is Alexandra Rover. Alexandra asked her are you alone?
And She said yeas, and She was crying.Alexandra Was hesitant i go from San Francisco to help or not, In the end, I decided to go,And was very scared.
In the meantime, was Bird gull help her father. The visitors to the island but the girl managed to evict them. Everyone was in disbelief that there is a girl on the island, just one boy, Because he saw and spoke to her. After that The writer arrived to the island,The shock of the girl. Because it was believed the man and not woman. She is angry from the Alexandra and told her just go out island. The writer tried to assist them. Sat down with some, And ate dinner, was refusing to eat, Because eating was a group of worms. The next day she saw her father from afar middle of the ocean.She Was very happy,she is hug her father, And said to him, i was think you're dead. In the meantime, he saw the Alexandra, and asked His daughter who is she?
And told him the all story. And he love Alexandra And decided To marry her.

Teacher's Note: This is quite a lovely essay, thorough and complete. Let's focus on the P. 83 syntax and consistent time reference. As with the previous essays, I recommend present tense. Thanks for posting.
--mike http://www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[sultanraad]

Nim and her father, Alex. A good story. Nim's father wanted to go on a business trip in the middle of the sea. Nim like to read stories. Nim read about Alex [Rover]. And wanted to communicate with her [him], but Alex suffers [suffered] from mental illness, which led to lack of getting out of the house. Nim was trying, but cut off all means of communication. Nim wanted to communicate with her father but can[could] not. After that, the father returned from work and Nim Nim happy arrival of her father.

Teacher's Note: Good writing. This essay could use a little more detail to tell the story. I like how it succeeds in covering a complete summary to the end. Thanks for posting. --mike www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com