NIM'S ISLAND

[ibrahim1408]

Nim's Island is a story about girl her name Nim. She lives in the island with her father. Her father is name Jack. She lost her mother in the sea. She loves animal husbandry and She has lion sea,gull bird,and iguana. She likes to read a book. The book wrote by Alexandra Rover. Nim thinks Alexandra Rover [is a] man, but Alexandra Rover is woman.((I think Alexandra Rover Pseudonym)).In oneday,Her father goes to work through the sea on a small boat,So she lives alone. She uses wireless to calls her father. After several days, her father does not feel good because he is suffering of a storm in sea. She does not know anything for her father. She sends to Alexandra Rover. She asks help. In the meantime, Some people come to the island For the tourism . Nim Attempts to out [get rid of] the people. Nim uses a

[abdulkarim algehedan]

There was a girl living with her father on the island in the sea where. his father worked on the research in biology. The girl was living a happy life with animals [on] the island where he was friends of animals. The girl you love [The girl loves] nature, animals and scenic island in the Community.The girl you love stories of heroes, where she read [p. 83] stories of heroes . One day the girl's father wen [goes]t to sea to search for rare herbs, but the vessel which was with him Chamber of.The girl saw a ship where the bad guys trying to take over the island.He [She] asked help from Superman to help her save the island from the bad guys .The hero to help the girl to save the island from the bad guys and saved the girl's father from the sea

Teacher's Note: Thanks for a very good and complete essay. This author is showing great improvement in his English writing skill. Thanks for posting and keep improving.
--mike www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[al-dayel86]

Nim Island occurred in this story. Small beautiful girl his mother had died. His [Her] father was a reconnaissance and likes to discover things from the depths of his father and went sailing into the ocean alone. Nim was alone after his father was going to sail to the depths of that world. Some of the animals help Nim to spend some times in the work. And [she] was in love with the reading. With whom he had written his name Alex Rover Rover book a fascinating story. Nim was sent a person named Alex Rover Rover thinks he is a man and correspondence came after Alex Rover Rover to the island Nim think [p. 83] he is a man after that Alex Rover Rover arrived to the island and in fact reached the woman pretended character Alex Rover Rover. His father was in the middle of the ocean ITS A powerful typhoon was I will claim the lives of some of the animals the help. The storm was Kadmt Studi their lives after that his father arrived Basmaadh some animals.

Teacher's Note: Even though this essay needs work on the syntax, I can understand the author's meaning. It is a very complete summary from beginning to end. Thank you for posting.
--mike www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[aliyousef86]

The girl [Nim] swim [p. 83] with sea lion in island, And she play [p. 83] with him. The seagulls flying above the island. the slhfa swim in the ocean. There have home in the island to girl and her father, And they have sailing boat. The girl taked a book of the box and she she reading before sleap. Her father went on the boat to ocean and he will return on thursday. The girl came back his home, in the evening she played with sea lion, Chaeleon and they dancing [danced] with sound of music. In the after noon the storm coming. After the call with his father, He drop[ed] out of the boat. The sail broke and the boat crash[ed] part of it. The storm coming to the island, His home destruction and at the morning she amendment his home and same that her father amendment his boat. The father is hungry and the seagulls help him. The girl climpmountain to see her father but the land shake and she coming down quickly.

Teacher's Note: There is a lot of good vocabulary here. I suggest use present tense and pay attention to grammar structure. Look at the suggestions above. Thanks for posting, my friend.
--mike www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[q0501033778]

Nim's Island
This story talks about the girl who was with her father in the jungle . Her father was of scientists then went on a boat to the sea . And leave [He left] Nim's alone and in the island with the sea lion Selkie. When the Nim's to sleeping started [Nim was sleeping, she] to read the story Alix Rever . At the same time her father was exposed to the storm . And Writer the story came to the island to help Nim's . When the ship came out a lot of tourists . And [Nim] was trying to contact her father . But he does [did] not answer And . In the latest story unanimously agreed with her father and story writer on their own . I tthink [sp] that [is] good story.

Teacher's Note: This essay covers the story quite well although the author should be careful with syntax, tense, and time. Big thanks for posting.

--mike www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[saeed3025]

Nim girl lives with her ??father in the forest. With animals. She loves to read stories a lot. Because of concern about her father at work. But [she] read the story of Nim and Alex[. She] liked the story and its owner. And wanted to continue with Alex. But Alex suffers from mental illness. Nim and Alex [her father, Jack] that she thought a man. Which is in fact a woman. I tried to connect with Alex but Alex was afraid to communicate with the outside community. Due to lack of confidence in itself[herself]. Nim tried to communicate with her ??father, who went out to Sea for exploration and laid siege to the father of Nim winds and tornadoes. Resulting in a broken boat, and Nim's father lost contact with his daughter. Some of the animals to help Nim and her father. The means of communication between Nim and her father.

Teacher's Note: Thanks for a thorough summary with a fresh point of view. The English grammar will improve with practice. There is good use of present tense here! Also, there is good vocabulary.

--mike www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[boodz321]

abdullah-th
island girl is nims island she lives on the island with her father and friends she speaksg with womon on the internet sh says her hame alex rover is living in san francisco alexande comes lo nims island to help nim..

[doode104]

an island with her father, Nimlives on jack and many a nimals . she is alone on is the land but she reads books abuat Alex Rover. He has odvontue stories.jack's ship was near a volcano and he left on a small boat .

[medoo]

The movis is about a girl in the forest. across sea . Her name is Nam . Her only friends and her father , and crustceans . My rrh preposition windstorm , She genius concrete coruscating wit and sapience , She embryogeny delighted then be father hither .

[norah]

Norah
Nims Island is a girl who lives with her father. Her name is Nim and her fathers name ia jack. She dos not go to school she is home svhooled. Her father tool her she geat mor thing from her mother. Nim loves to read a story. Nim father cost in sea and he tells her he wiil com, but he is vere late. Nim is alone afteer her dad goes to the swa, and she feels scared becuse many people come in holeday. Nim sends for Alex Rover to came and help her. AlexRover is a fraid to go, but she wants to help nim. She feels she cant go but she does. Alex Rover lives in Sanfrancisco, and she travels to nim to help her. When alex comes nime doesnt want her to stay with her.