IRON MAN

[minsu0108]

The movie starts, and Tony Stark will tell you whether someone is a joke when you hear his. And then he was introduced, and his detailed history. He is the son of the legendary weapons developer Howard Stark He also got the attention from childhood to the brightest brains and wit He's a genius, a new leap forward lead to the company founded by his father His company created to sell the company as a military weapon

"Defend freedom and keep the state and national interests" is a company with the slogan He is a person who has money, fame, talent, appearance, everything Then he is kidnapped by a terrorist group and The most important is to realize one thing. It's "family" is a special person

Since then he has succeeded in creating mark1 armor and escapes . Tony made ??another armor mark And he had a fight against with a threat to world peace and terrorist groups and renegade odedia Finally, he keeps the peace in the world And the superhero "iron man" called

Teacher note: Notice how I reformatted this essay. There are a number of syntax/grammar issues that we must address. Also, we need to know where each sentence ends with a period (full stop). There is a lot of set-up but not enough actual summary. Spelling is mostly great. Thanks for posting. --mike www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[Queena]

I have to say:' This is an inspiring movie.' Tony, super niubable designers, super niubable engineer. In poor conditions to get rapid design and development, at ease in the environment does not forget to product test and upgrade. Finally won the victory.

He is an appearance of the arrogant and callous man, but in fact I very talkative and funny, like some of the open no joke
the hero tony is a charming romantic life , talented and successful entrepreneurs,and change the after ''iron man'' image is cool hot ,Very powerful .

Iron is he the most powerful source of power, without it, he and any a rich family no distinction, have its essence, he became the patron saint of the world-iron man. So, Iron Man mean, "development is the absolute principle". I know that the film is not over. I'm looking forward to seeing the'' iron man 2 ''

Teacher note: Wow! This feels more like a string of vocabulary than a summary (sorry). During the coming weeks, we will need to focus on English syntax. Start with simple straightforward sentences and build from there. There is a ton of great vocabulary here. Thanks for posting. --mike http://www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[suetkwan]

Tony Stark was born in a wealthy family, he is very smart , 17-years-old graduate of MIT. After death of parents, tony begin control of the tens of billions of property arms business, but he is very arrogant, arrogant make he bring a lot trouble.

Soon, he was kidnapped, this moment tony almost died , but this thing make tony change. because tony woke up and found the chest more than a strange device, while maintain the his life. Because terrorists need the he help design weapons, so, he was terrorists of kidnap. And then,he will know they would kill him, so, he with friend together made the steel armor save oneself.

Unfortunately he friend hope more time help his, make he can escape, terrorists was kills him. So he improved steel armor, created another piece of fusion energy, a real Iron Man.

Teacher note: This summary only covers the first part of the movie. It needs more information. Also there is a mix of past tense and present tense for no reason. Better to use present tense for infinite time. Good start. --mike http://www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[Allensu]

Tony Stark is the complete playboywho also happens to be an engineering genius. Unlucky the parents are gone, But Tony stark keep the business improve.He has a sexy capoleble Secretary can help to the company .

When Tony led the group of men and military observers to the boundary of the deserted their newly developed test results, only to encounter a group of extremely aggressive terrorist attacks. But he is lucky because he used the armored suit to escape .

When he cack to the U.S convene the Interview than close his company to discuss technology for begins work on an updated armored suit . But he find Obadiah Stane using his research. So he stop Shane from misusing his research .

Teacher note: This is a super-concise summary, perhaps too concise. It could benefit from more detail. Also, be careful with spelling. Always check before submitting an essay. Big thanks. --mike http://www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[Daniel]

Hi, I am Daniel.

When the movie start, we look the Tony Stark make weapons have a great deal of damage. Rebels attack Tony and American army. Tony was captured, his heart is injured. A doctor saves his life. The rebels ask Tony make weapons for them, but Tony doesn

[Benjamin_kang]

The Iron Man

I am going to write about movie of The Iron movie. This movie is about super hero story. The Iron Man has good Actors.They are Robert John Downey Jr(Tony Stark ),Gwyneth Paltrow(Pepper Potts),Terrence Dashon Howard(James Road),Jeffrey Leon Bridges(OBADIAH STANE ).

First, the story begins in Afghanistan.While Tony Stark and several soldiers are going to where,They suffered an attack from enemy. and Tony Stark gets hurt his heart. when he gets up, he is looking for his heart. and he got a big shock. The enemy want to get new Missile from Tony Stark.The enemy said "If you make Strong Missiles for me,I can give you save" Tony Stark says yes. and than he is making somethong. But it is now missile. that is the super hero of armorFinally he has made the super armor,next he Attack the enemy.

Tony Stark came back in U.S.A. and than he get a press conference about what he got happen in Afghanistan.and he say "I will never make the missiles and Weapons.

finally he became superhero with his sute. and he fights with enemy. The Iron man movie story is really funny movie.if you didn't watch it, I would like to say you must watch it please! I love this movie.

Benjamin_kang

Teacher note: Please never start with 'I am going to write about...' Just write about. This essay includes a nice summary of the first act but very little about the rest of the movie, mostly opinion. A well-written summary contains a balanced coverage of the entire film. There is some good vocabulary here, and it is easy to read (clear). Thanks. --mike http://www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

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[Chaochen]

Tony stark is the leading in the movie <<IRON MAN>>, In this movie he has a company and the company's role is to develop weapons, he is the genius in the sphere of weapons. so lot of bad guys looking for he want he make weapons for they.

when Tony Stark going to some country to sell the weapons for they government After that he down with he's work he was on the way to home the bad guys kidnapped him to a place and dug his heart than gave a false heart for he, the false heart need electricity to star. The leader of the bad guys want he make a strong weapons for they, but Tony stark is smart, he use the material from they to create his firt Iron man, he use it escape from their control than go back to his home,

when he go back to home the first thing he do is announce on the press conference to tell everybody he will cloese the comepany he want stop the manufacture of weapons. But he partner obadiah very angry it, obadiah want tony stark keep the company as before.

After the press conference tony stark create his new Iron man to help people, but his partner obadiah use his company create Another one Iron man, he want use it to do some badthings, but the luky thing is tony stark timely to prevent him.

Teacher note: This summary starts strong, but it doesn't say much about what happens after Tony escapes and returns to America. There are some good transition words here like 'after' 'when' 'another'. These help to make this essay easy to read. Good job. --mike http://www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[Zacharyzhang]

Tony is an arms dealer, inherited his career with his father. Tony in a display of weapons was hijacked en route, asked Tony to give them a terrorist organization weapons. Hijacking of the day, Tony has created a steel jacket. This steel jacket with a variety of weapons. Tony in the steel jacket under the protection of his cave to escape a hijacking.

Returned to his country. Tony improved improved steel jacket, making it more powerful. Tony's partner wants to get his property to kill Tony. So partner Tony came to hijack the original place to find the steel jacket. Tony improvement in the steel jacket is complete back to kidnap his place to eliminate the bad guys. Partner produced more steel jacket, used to deal with Tony.

Finally, partners and Iron Man for a duel, Iron Man victory.

Teacher note: Please notice how the format is improved. This essay is concise and covers the entire movie pretty well. We will need to work on English sentence structure. Some sentences don't even have verbs. Ouch!! Thanks for posting. --mike http://www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[annalikeyou]

last week see this moviewas exciting. Stark has used his Iron Man armor to help maintain world peace. He re-institutes the Stark Expo in Flushing Meadows to continue his father Howard's legacy.

Senator Stern (Garry Shandling) demands that Stark turn over the Iron Man technology to the government. Stark refuses, claiming that foreign nations and business competitors are decades away from successfully recreating his achievements. IRONMAN actor tony are very smart and cool . Although have so many difficult and terrible .he didn't give up . I want to learn of his efforts and will.

Finally .he was win he returned to his life . and found his love .it's so beautiful end. The movie give me so many important impressions. thank you mike~~

Teacher note: This essay is very brief. Some sentences have many grammar errors, yet some are perfectly sculpted. I wonder why? A teacher always notices this kind of thing. Thanks for posting. --mike http://www.MoviesGrowEnglish.com

[chloe]

This is the short summary of "Iron Man". (NO NEED)

Tony Stark's company develops weapons and sells to other countries. He was captivated in Afghanistan by the people who wants his technology. While Tony was captured, instead of giving enemies his new weapons, he develops the Iron Man suit to escape. He realized that the weapons that he makes kills a lot of na