My favorite character is r[R]apunzel she is victim egoism mother gothel [Mother Gothel]. did not see her mother and father. Did[She did] not make them see the outside word. Did not enjoy her life is not out of the tower. Never [She never] lived like the rest of her hair, which amdt aalmost [sp] 7 meters in what is the secret? Is the meteorite fell to earth from the sun and made her only mother gothel then, when the queen fell ill before. She was bore takers [followed the persons who took] this meteorite and found the guards. The queen drank it [the medicine] and bore a beautiful girl [with] blonde hair. Mother gothel came and wanted to cut from to take [and cut some off] but and turned brown. [She] Did not find a solution, either [so she] kidnapped princess. Her curiosity [The princess, Rapunzel was curious] to see the stars that come out every day [night] in the festival to make it out of her tower with the assistance flynn rider [Flynn Ryder]. gets her many problems. to go and see the lights of a nearby [nearby light]. After the piece familiar with its people and become a princess. [After she was free of Mother Gothel. Rapunzel finally became the princess of her destiny.]
Teacher's note: This is a very nice essay, but there are a number of GPS issues. I like the overall content and level of detail. Thanks for posting.
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