1. A school president calls to his (Who?) home, and look[s] for his friend to offer part time job(school teacher) to his friend. However, Dewey get[s] a call, and fraud to the president that he is a Ned(he is a man that the president is looking for). After all, Dewey goes to school and get a job.
2. One day, Dewey see[s] that his class students plays classic instruments such as a piano, guitar. So, he think[s] that if he teach[es] students how to play rock music, he can form a rock band. So, after his students come back to class, he deceive his students that if they win the rock contest they can easily enter good colleges. Students accept his idea, and then form a School Of Rock!!!!!!
3. Dewey is crazy about rock. He just think[s] about rock everyday! So, first day at school, He never teach[es] students anything. and just sit[s] on and play guitar. However, he begins change. He really think[s] about his students, and truly keep[s] in touch with students.
4. The movie, 'School Of Rock' was really famous in Korea when I was 6th grade in Elementry school. That time, I never watched this movie. I just thought that It would be a story about music in school. However, after I had watched this movie in USC, I regreted that why I watch this valuable movie now.
This movie consisted of full of fun, but also, included impression. These days, Many students have to study really hard. Of course, they do not have enough time to hanging around with their friends, this movie talked to us that adults have to help our children(s) to bringing their potential out, and also, it taught us first duty of students is happy not a study.
Teacher's note: Thanks for a thorough job. The level of vocabulary and general syntax in this piece suggests a fairly high level of writing, yet this author consistently omits the "s" ending on the present simple tense. Let's be sure and check for GPS in our writing. The summary is presented as a list which seems unusual, but I like it because it breaks up the subtopics, and makes it easy to follow. I'm thrilled that this film made such a strong impression on this author. Nice post!
--mike

